Writing Task 2 (an essay)
In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach? Give your opinion.
In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents' home once they finish school. they start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach? Give your opinion. Self-dependent is nowadays a trend observed in many countries where the youngster after finishing their school leave their hometown to another region of the world to become motivated, independent and can stand on their feet. In my opinion, I completely agree with this approach and in details are discussed in the following paragraphs. Firstly, the approach of living independently makes us confident, strong enough to face the world challenges, living without parents allow people to understand the real world and an opportunity to learn things themselves. take for an example, In India, most students after finishing their school life tend to move abroad leaving behind their families to acquire higher studies and better job possibilities to grab as much as the knowledge they can from the world. Secondly, living alone or with friends provide the platform for the youngster to have an independent decision in critical situations and teaches a lot to the person about his decision-making capabilities and teaches about the human behaviour, such as dealing with other people around you independently, taking medical care of your ill roommate and helping your friend in assignments, creating shared values with friends and neighbour are beneficial and memorable for the young generation to have a good human touch. In conclusion, allowing a youngster to live away from the parent is a very hard decision but it has a fruitful output and teaches their children to understand the real world and build up their self-confidence and make them stand on their feet
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- Writing Task 2 (an essay)In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach? Give your o 56
- Writing Task 2 (an essay)In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach? Give your o 56
- Writing Task 2 (an essay)In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach? Give your o 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...r parents home once they finish school. they start living on their own or sharing a ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 794, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Take
...opportunity to learn things themselves. take for an example, In India, most students...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16494845361 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83575748787 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.663044824 49.4020404114 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.3 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.529573024041 0.244688304435 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240686406119 0.084324248473 285% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162701695455 0.0667982634062 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.529573024041 0.151304729494 350% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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