WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Write at least 250 words.
one of the major environmental challenges which face humanity today is the average global temperatures become hotter with age. this is mainly because of human behavior causing the increase in co2, which is the result of illegal logging and over-consumption of fossil fuels. there are a number of solutions that should be implemented for not only the government but also individuals to deal with that problem.
Firstly, the reason for climate change is due to burning fossil fuels in order to operate vehicles and factories which causing the production of heat-trapping gases. As the exponential increasing co2 in the atmosphere would worsen the greenhouse effect, making the Earth hotter. Apparently, it would be having great difficulty even limiting fossil energy consumption for industrialization and commuting by car, motorbike, and so on, let alone stopping it. Secondly, trees have been shown to help absorb a great amount of co2, thereby slowing down the process of global warming. However, in our own time, due to personal profit purposes, many of those cleared forest. Without being absorbed by plants, the amount of co2 can be at an alarming rate and as a result, the situation of global warming would be getting worse and worse.
there are some effective solutions to the problem of global warming which need tackling by both government intervention and individuals. one way that the state to solve this is to promulgate a stricter law so that they can prevent illegal deforestation and do heavily fine companies which discharge toxic gases into the air. they are also to throw their weight behind some campaigns to encourage people to use alternative energy sources in order to reduce carbon emissions are produced. By planting more trees, can each of us reducing a lot of co2 and alleviating the effect of global warming. In addition, get involved in environmental protection campaign is a wonderful way to raise our awareness of global warming and how to address it efficiently.
On the whole, global warming is one of the most imperative environmental issues that is posing a serious threat to the world, and steps need to be taken by the council and individuals to solve this problem.
- WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and indiv 78
- Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue 89
- Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not Give your opinions 78
- Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not What are your opinions in this 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10220994475 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90135874088 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580110497238 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0888332936 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.133333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174279633911 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567513968631 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542068693937 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122072164293 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523025955573 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.