you do not buy stuff but corporations make you buy stuff through agressive marketing and promotion do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... marketing and promotional techinques. I agree that these techniques forces the p...
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... the upcoming paragraphs. To begin with ,the predominant reason behind my agreeme...
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...ted with the involvement of celebritites .To be precise, people regard celebrities...
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...d with the involvement of celebritites .To be precise, people regard celebrities a...
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... people regard celebrities as their idol .Hence they have a keen desire to adopt t...
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Suggestion: Hence
...eople regard celebrities as their idol .Hence they have a keen desire to adopt those ...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...eople regard celebrities as their idol .Hence they have a keen desire to adopt those ...
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...r role models as they resemble like them .Buisnessmen take advantage of these emot...
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Suggestion: Buisnessmen
...role models as they resemble like them .Buisnessmen take advantage of these emotions of peo...
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...tives to enchance their profit margins. .To exemplify, Lux, that is a popular soa...
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...ves to enchance their profit margins. .To exemplify, Lux, that is a popular soap ...
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...o exemplify, Lux, that is a popular soap ,is used by majority of people due to the...
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...ertised by famous actress for many years .Thusly ,corporations seek help of famous...
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...tised by famous actress for many years .Thusly ,corporations seek help of famous perso...
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...by famous actress for many years .Thusly ,corporations seek help of famous persona...
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...fective stratigies to attract customers.In this regad, they offer special discount...
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...nd gift bouchers for selling their items .For example ,many branded companies offe...
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... gift bouchers for selling their items .For example ,many branded companies offer h...
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...ers for selling their items .For example ,many branded companies offer heavy disco...
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...ffer heavy discounts on festival seasons .This phenomena compels masses to buy the...
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...er heavy discounts on festival seasons .This phenomena compels masses to buy the ite...
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...er heavy discounts on festival seasons .This phenomena compels masses to buy the ite...
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...nts on festival seasons .This phenomena compels masses to buy the items irrespective of...
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...o buy the items irrespective of its need .Attractive packaging is also priotized b...
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...buy the items irrespective of its need .Attractive packaging is also priotized by buisness...
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...ng is also priotized by buisness holders to increase the sale which proves an eff...
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...e method to flock children. To conclude ,effective marketing and promotional skil...
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Suggestion: tool
...and promotional skills are an important tools that are used by industialists to attra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, thus, for example, in my view, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31835205993 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87545825572 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.485328508 49.4020404114 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.857142857 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1428571429 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969916220452 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553889714937 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497201478182 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713748957948 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489914897296 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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