you do not buy stuff but corporations make you buy stuff through agressive marketing and promotion .do you agree or disagree
In today's high advanced era, markets are flooded with a variety of advertisements that allures consumers to grasp the product with the help of impressive marketing and promotional techinques. I agree that these techniques forces the potential customers to buy the product. The following paragraphs will explain my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with ,the predominant reason behind my agreement is related with the involvement of celebritites .To be precise, people regard celebrities as their idol .Hence they have a keen desire to adopt those items that are used by their role models as they resemble like them .Buisnessmen take advantage of these emotions of people and use it for their own selfish motives to enchance their profit margins. .To exemplify, Lux, that is a popular soap ,is used by majority of people due to the fact that it has been advertised by famous actress for many years .Thusly ,corporations seek help of famous personalities to provoke internal feeling of customers to buy their products.
Probing further, buisness person also plan effective stratigies to attract customers.In this regad, they offer special discount and gift bouchers for selling their items .For example ,many branded companies offer heavy discounts on festival seasons .This phenomena compels masses to buy the items irrespective of its need .Attractive packaging is also priotized by buisness holders to increase the sale which proves an effective method to flock children.
To conclude ,effective marketing and promotional skills are an important tools that are used by industialists to attract humans to buy the material although they do not have any dire need of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, thus, for example, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31835205993 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87545825572 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.485328508 49.4020404114 276% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.857142857 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1428571429 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969916220452 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553889714937 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497201478182 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713748957948 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489914897296 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 13.0946893788 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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