International sports events are costly and also bring problem for the hosting nation .to what extent do you agree with the statement
It is undeniable that organizing sports events brings name and frame for a country; however, holding such events is very expensive as it puts extra burden on the economy of a nation. I do believe that although organizing multinational sports activities is a costly task yet the infrastructure that is improved during this task benefits the local afterwards. This essay will explain my view point before reaching the conclusion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the major advantage of holding international matches is that it helps to improve the condition of infrastructure as well as raise the living standard of people. To be precise, special attention is paid on the maintenance of roads, proper lighting system and keeping the surrounding spic and span which proves beneficial for the local residents too. For example, the roads of Europe are well established due to FIFA cup that is mostly held there. Moreover, these international matches also assist to boost the economy of the host country because the international players and the foreign spectator pay money to buy local crafts, for hiring taxes and for staying in hotels which helps to improve the standard of living of residents and proves beneficial to ameliorate the economy of hosting nation.
On the other hand, holding these events has few disadvantages also. The major drawback is connected with environment as trees have to cut down and farmland is cleared as well for making stadiums which gives birth to deforestation. Furthermore, the pollution that is increased due to increasing number of vehicles also puts detrimental impact on the health of local people. For example, people start suffering from health issues like asthma, heart diseases during these sports programs. Hence, both people and environment has to suffer due to these sports activities
To conclude, international sports events has both pros and cons .If these programs are organized in a systematic way, then it would be advantageous for the hosting nation as it would not only enhance its popularity but also upgrade the living standard of its residents.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Suggestion: If
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Message: Consider replacing "in a systematic way" with adverb for "systematic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, for example, as well as, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22058823529 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86937504499 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.5313832608 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.916666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263338390317 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827229745749 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585646234804 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152050829224 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219599621059 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ding these events has few disadvantages also. The major drawback is connected with e...
^^^^
Line 6, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...de, international sports events has both pros and cons .If these programs are org...
^^
Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...al sports events has both pros and cons .If these programs are organized in a sys...
^^
Line 6, column 67, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
... sports events has both pros and cons .If these programs are organized in a syste...
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Line 6, column 99, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a systematic way" with adverb for "systematic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d cons .If these programs are organized in a systematic way, then it would be advantageous for the...
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Line 6, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...grams are organized in a systematic way, then it would be advantageous for the ho...
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Line 6, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...it would not only enhance its popularity but also upgrade the living standard of ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, for example, as well as, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22058823529 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86937504499 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.5313832608 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.916666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263338390317 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827229745749 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585646234804 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152050829224 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219599621059 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.