You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
More and more prisons are being built to house the world's criminals and many people believe long-term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem.
However, others feel that medical and psychological assistance is what is required.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The establishment of many prisons is likely a solution to criminal activities. Some people believe that the answer to the crime problem is long-term imprisonment, while others want to apply medical and psychological support. This article will discuss my views and opinion about why medical treatment is more necessary.
On the one hand, imprisonment is an invisible way to reduce the rate of crimes. Using the heaviest punishment to take freedom, the government can give an implicit warning message to anyone who does the same activities. Moreover, jailing prisoners can be compulsory for what they did.
On the other hand, psychological treatment may give prisoners a chance to fix their life. Some people are affected by family, living environment, or education, which give them false perceptions of good or bad things. This medical or psychological assistance can direct them to the right view of the world. Besides, if they have good re-education, they may reduce their jail time and soon be free. The fact is that some of them become good citizens with stable jobs; others set up a business to create jobs for many people, especially those who have a similar situation like them - released from prison.
Personally, the court relied on condition, mentality, causes, consequences, and extra factors to give appropriate punishment for a crime. Medical and psychological assistance is essential to correct the captive's perception and help them control their behavior better. Unless they do not improve compared to standards, they are still jailed. This method may benefit the prison budget.
In conclusion, imprisonment is the strictest punishment that can limit any future crime and let prisoners do penance. However, I firmly agree that applying medical and psychological assistance can change a bad person whose transformation may bring many good values to society.
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- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic More and more prisons are being built to house the world s criminals and many people believe long term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem However others fe 84
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic More and more prisons are being built to house the world s criminals and many people believe long term imprisonment is the answer to solving the crime problem However others fe 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 203, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'captives'' or 'captive's'?
Suggestion: captives'; captive's
... assistance is essential to correct the captives perception and help them control their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33783783784 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96368219003 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611486486486 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4763299059 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9411764706 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167554033581 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540483602147 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518409372245 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098802368148 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910061901658 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.