You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers in most countries.
How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
Joblessness has been deemed an anathema for any graduates, which is justifiable as they can not scratch a living. Although this issue is the most powerful brunt that puts school-leavers under pressure, I believe that other problems encircling them are concerning as well.
Being unemployed is always a nightmarish prospect for anyone, especially youngsters since they are ambitious and have just set forth on life: they are so fickle that they can be swayed like a hung pendulum by any challenges offered by life. The inability to self-subsistence renders them hopeless and disheartened. All ramifications posed from unemployment are also a nail in the coffin for them: namely, words of mouth from others doubting their potentials can be a momentum pushing them to the verge of depression.
Yet, not being hired is only one of the factors that pressurize the youth today. Female graduates might encounter pay inequality and an abrupt avalanche of household chores as well as duress; meanwhile, they are more susceptible to burnouts, a syndrome that can wreak havoc on people’s health, more than their male counterparts. Simultaneously, men, in general, will likely be the target of disdain if they fail to take off their careers or live up to the expectations of others. All these quandaries can make both genders doubt their self-worth and shrink their self-esteem.
To encapsulate, dilemmas facing young adults are their inertia, yet can also be the lessons helping them sustain with instability better if they know how to muster their strength. It’s high time they learned from Marcus Aurelius: “Obstacles can not make you far from your target; they only make you redirect your approach. What stands in the way becomes the way.”
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Joblessness has been deemed an anathema ...
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Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...eve that other problems encircling them are concerning as well. Being unemployed is alway...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...circling them are concerning as well. Being unemployed is always a nightmarish...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20921985816 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93174067152 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670212765957 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1309815648 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.416666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0935224795596 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324883701823 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351318898941 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607905850033 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033528160637 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.