» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
» Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts compare how a children’s charitable organization in the USA utilized its revenue sources and expenditures on different categories.
Overall, as can be seen from the delineation, the total of the charity’s resources was higher than that of its spending. In addition, most people donated food to the organization while it invested most in program services.
In terms of received goods, food accounted for the most significant proportion of almost 90%. Meanwhile, the community contributions took up above one-tenth of the pie chart whereas the program revenue only made up an asymmetry that was less than that by fivefold. The percentages of investment income and government grants were 0.2 simultaneously while the figure for other income was double that.
Turning to allocated funds, program services were the most appreciable segment in the latter chart with a ratio of 95.8%. In the meantime, fundraising and management and general contributed 2.6% and 1.6% respectively to the pictorial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50318471338 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1360744377 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656050955414 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3636336001 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801676598241 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312242283145 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349262646094 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500706670247 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360800808881 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.