You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The astonishing development velocity of our society has prompted some issues that need redressing; one of them is the decline in children’s illiteracy. While some people advocate drastic shifts in the modern world do not necessitate handwriting; I believe in the opposite.
To be capable of exploiting the Internet, kids have to garner rudiments about all their functions. From my perspective, children are too young to be overloaded with that kind of data. Moreover, innovative permutation utility wreaks havoc on kids’ eyesight and mars their bone structure since they have to sit still most of the time. Consequently, those detrimental ramifications render them inclined to a sedentary lifestyle, running the risk of contracting diseases pertaining to the skeleton, lack of alacrity, and nonchalance towards mutual interaction. All of us, hence, should be on the alert of those presumed repercussions before they descend and destroy the next generations.
On the other hand, writing by hand can provoke cognitive development and expressive skills in a positive manner. Valid testament is scant, yet it is not anecdotal knowledge if we juxtapose the literacy skills of our forerunners with those of ours. In addition, as an avid logophile, I can assert from my personal experience that jotting down on papers helps students memorize content better. Thus, handwriting abolition is implausible and impulsive as the demerits outweigh the benefits.
To encapsulate, I think that with the rapid change speed of the community in which we dwell will embark on demanding different things compared to the part. However, we should always preserve the pristine of our culture regardless.
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| 2021-10-09 | stanie calitex | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...end and destroy the next generations. On the other hand, writing by hand can p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, while, i think, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45801526718 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07630746487 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687022900763 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5072379603 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109458378712 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341790050041 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299262069529 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590855769175 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309355455526 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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