You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In the contemporary era drugs,alcohols or illegal stuff are getting more popular in youg communities.The young individuals intent to experience both legal and illegal drugs.There is many kind of different reason to this situation but according to some parts of sociologists responsibility belong to parents.
Initially,especially nowadays using this kind of legal and illegal drugs became more common and normal for teenagers.This reason should be research by parents,teacher even governments.Relevant to some professional people parents bad habits can cause increase drugs consume in early age.And also especially in the for young people in the teenagers time can be pass hard and rough.For examples.in this age range people mostly cannot be happy with their parents.According to young person parents are mostly insensitive thus they arguing most of time with each other.In this period most of the young people because of the parents feeling depressive and they find the drugs as a solution.For example, high amount of teenagers are starting consume to drugs with this way.
On the other ways,parents habits are effecting on their children.If the mother and father always drink alcohol or cigarettes while the their children at home can cause the same conclusion,Such as they can start first with one cigarette and after days later it's can switch with weed.For examples most of the movies actors are consume drugs for be cool.And it can be badly effect to individuals.
Eventually,reduce the using drugs is not impossible by government regulations.According to my reccommendation first of all, the governments should be restiract to all kind of movies and songs to encourage to drugs or alcohol.And the secondly, parents and teacher should observe the teenage persons and explain the why is unhealthy for their bodies.Fight to youth drugs abuse can prevent before too late with under the law and education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43288590604 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42467544065 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.615055511 49.4020404114 351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 404.75 106.682146367 379% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.5 20.7667163134 359% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224913250851 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130779090743 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495518787004 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130779090743 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495518787004 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.4 13.0946893788 316% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 50.2224549098 -24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 11.3001002004 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.4 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.23 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.