You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?
You should write at least 250 words.
It is often believed that it is good characteristic for people to have a sense of competition in most cultures. In my opinion, competitiveness among employees is beneficial, however this quality in daily life is more negative. This essay will describe how it affects to humans.
On the one hand, having sense of competition is positive in the working environment. In other words, competitiveness helps people to grow professionally and make a career. According to the research of Harvard University, more than 75 percent of employees who was promoted in the first 3 years had sense of competition. Moreover, 9 out of 10 top managers compete with others. Therefore, I think that competitiveness in the workplace is great quality, which helps to career.
On the other hand, competitiveness in the daily life is counted as being jealous. In other words, society does not accept envy human in their environment. For instance, according to American Psychological Association person, who always compares himself with others, starts to degradate. Especially, when human wants to have the same cloth, staff like "new IPhone" or "IMac", or even family, and wastes his energy to the negative emotions. People must compare himself only with him yesterday that is why I think that man this is more negative quality.
To conclude, however most societies think that competitiveness is beneficial personal skill, it depends on usage of quality in daily life or workplace. So, competitiveness in the workplace is positive characteristics, but in routine life it is more negative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39442231076 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36763931967 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6982689961 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20844087428 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736610862853 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469943444233 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135882271857 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428104914692 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.