You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Due to the massive development in facilities of Information Technology, people are now living in a world full of media. Although this creates more connection between people and people , it also has some drawbacks. This essay sheds light on both side of the problem how the age of information if influencing us.
To begin with, it is very clear that living in a media rich society provides us with endless opportunities. In the past, it was very difficult for employer to find suitable candidate and the same situation happened to employee to find a job. However, thanks to the Internet, this problem has been solved as information can be spread to any places all around the world. Moreover, technology has removed the distance among people. Nowadays, it is very common to live very far away from family and friends while still aware of their situation.
In the other hand, the media also has some disadvantages. Firstly, people are so dependence on texting, emailing, and calling that a day without their phone or laptop would make them feel cut off. In addition, teenager are refusing to communicate directly to each other because they are too busy using their phone. Another drawback of the today's media is that we are being lost in the world of choices and information. There are so many TV channels to choose, so many sources of information that make people do not know what to choose and believe.
In a nutshell, there is no doubt that the media-rich society has made our life become much more easier. However we need to be aware of its power to survive in a world where people are being overwhelmed by the information
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ore connection between people and people , it also has some drawbacks. This essay ...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
...n with, it is very clear that living in a media rich society provides us with endless o...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...h society has made our life become much more easier. However we need to be aware of its pow...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... made our life become much more easier. However we need to be aware of its power to sur...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, in addition, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78723404255 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65045463796 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.9970046359 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143395329819 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047655691049 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051122014676 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919473467157 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406984196403 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.