Young people are seemed to be rackless and overly confident in the case of driving, because of this a huge number of people died in accidents. In my opinion, to reduce this problem, obviously, we could help children to learn the proper set of skills to safe driving in school. However, taking action by the government and providing strict laws against this kind of crime can be another solution.
By nature, youngsters like to thrill and enjoy life. And when it comes to driving, they can not control themselves, and it causes fatal accidents. This problem can be solved by educational institutions and by parents If they start to teach proper behavioral aspects. The most important part of a child is when they start to go to school. This is the most crucial time to teach a child good manners, do's and don'ts and this can be a good start.
In addition, some rich kids are not willing to obey the rules and regulations. In that case, governments will take the important part by establishing drastic laws on breaking traffic rules and careless driving. The fines for disobeying traffic rules should be high. Getting a driving license should be more difficult by taking a strict exam and before issuing the license proper background check should be done.
In conclusion, schools and government can reduce the stated problem by providing proper training, education and by making some strict rules and regulations. More importantly, schools can play a vital role to teach the students to be polite and obey the rules and regulations, because teachers can make the strong basement for students to be grown as good mankind.
- In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. 56
- Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologisedescribe what action you will takeWrite at least 150 words. 73
- Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?What other measures do you think might be effective? 61
- Young drivers are careless and overconfident and too many people are killed in accidents To eliminate this problem we could teach children the skills of safe driving while they are at school To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ducational institutions and by parents. If they start to teach proper behavioral a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02745098039 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65312594461 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7907265366 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5714285714 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173652334997 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617685120212 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693069712684 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111480474228 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086389260271 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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