Many young people around the world search for the better educational chance and jobs in the big cities.It is a kind of trend which happens everywhere. In my opinion, even there are some disadvantages to this trend, I still believe that the advantages of this trend out weigh the disadvantages.
There are two main reasons which urge young people to leave their rural towns and move to the cities. The first reason is that job market in the big cities is more active. Therefore, it is much easier for professionals to find the jobs in cities compared to the rural areas where the economics activities limited. The second reason is that most universities are located in the bog cities and these universities attract the ambitious students to earn higher degrees. Based on above reasons, cities allow more young people to have better jobs and enhance their financial conditions.
However, several disadvantages to this trend such as population growth in the cities causes the potential crime rate increasing. On the other hand, the old people are the only group remained in the rural area, and the industry in these areas are getting decay such as farming.
In conclusion, most of young people in rural areas tend to move to big cities for the reasons related to their career and education.Although there are some disadvantages to this trend, we can not deny that the individuals and the society have more benefits from the phenomenon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95867768595 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7408751694 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528925619835 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6038758234 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299334738471 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115306925601 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764686567146 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177114392258 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336522459431 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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