Young people are often influenced by others of the same age in their behaviour and Circumstances this is called Peer pressure." Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
youth is the most productive part of the population. There is no doubt that Juveniles often encourage by their friends, family and teachers. A major Strata of Society believe that children are most influence by their peer performance and Situations. Even though, this has both prons and cons,the benefits definetly outweigh the drawbacks. This essay will highlight the advantages Of this approach surpass the disadvantages brought by it.
Admittedly, one Of the root cause behind such exponential grouth Could be support and encouragement. This is due to the fact that, younger are tend to share their happiness and sorrow with their mates and comrades often help them in order to overcome any arduous Situations. To illustrate in better way a recent Study Conducted by cape breton universit in Canada suggests that 80% of children have tent to tell their hardles with their friends rather than any family members Owning to Comfort zone and poofound bond. paobing further, it is also beneficial for their academic growth as they teach each other about any topic they found difficult. Thus, if younger spend their time with Suitable comrades , they definetly lean many things and resul the will be fruitful for them.
Despite Support and encouragement get by them, its negative downside cannot be overlooked.Adopting bad habits from the Peers Ought to be detrimental Consequence for many young individuals since, many friends from Same age group drink alcohol and Smooke which is harmful for health. To Vindicate, article published in The Times Suggest that 15% of young people influnced by their peers and adapt their bad habits in 2019. Therfore, it is. necessary to understand. what to adapt оr not.
In Conclusion, Although tailor bad practices from peer is detrimental repercussion , I deem that it not only provides support in difficult Situation but also encourage them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24834437086 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78532578586 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645695364238 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.684141152 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225714075673 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593830134395 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549454786337 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119276848366 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675295310684 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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