Young people are often influenced in their behaviors by others in the same age group. Some argue that peer pressure is important while others feel it has distinct disadvantages. Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages?
In young generation, there is a trend that behaviors of youngsters are often affected by their peers. While peer pressure has some benefits, I believe that its drawbacks are weightier.
On the one hand, peer pressure is beneficial in a few ways. this is firstly because if adolescents expose to positive peer pressure, some of them may have motivations to study, to set higher goals. this may encourage students to be independent learners, which leads to they might achieve higher academic results. In addition to this, if young adults actively seek out positive peer groups, they might adopt healthier habits, for example, reading or engaging in physical fitness activities which promote more well-rounded lifestyle.
On the other hand, peer pressure has several shortcomings, outweighing the advantages. The primary reason is, negative peer pressure experience may make young individuals think they need to keep up with their peers, leading to a number of them is under pressure. As a result, it may affect work productivity. Another significant reason is, if juvenile succumb negative peer pressure, they might be lack in self-confident. this means that their mental health may be adversely affected.
In summary, peer pressure is associated with some drawbacks, which outweigh the benefits. For these reasons, it is recommended that having positive peer pressure interactions may be crucial to minimize the disadvantages.
- Young people are often influenced in their behaviors by others in the same age group Some argue that peer pressure is important while others feel it has distinct disadvantages Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages 56
- Young people are often influenced in their behaviors by others in the same age group Some argue that peer pressure is important while others feel it has distinct disadvantages Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in summary, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46396396396 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96807199091 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4254826985 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3076923077 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256446224503 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106865915032 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822159673257 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183063733549 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566457916524 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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