young people inn the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation.
Why is this the case?
What impact dose this have on the relationship between old and young people?
Nowadays the new generation looks like they have more impact than last generations. Because of the more and more advance technology the relationship between old and young individuals is getting deteriorated.
The technology it became part of a daily basis rutine for young people. Social media give them the power of freedom on expressing their feelings and becoming influencers for others. By filming themself testing products and giving their opinion , putting the video on youtube so others can make their mind base on that video, about buying or not that product.
The relationship between old and young people is getting worst because of the different point of view of them. While the young generation is more interested in the virtual world and new gadgets ,the old ones do not get along with it.
In conclusion young people are aware of the power of technology and take advantages of it, but at the same time that is distancing them from old people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...esting products and giving their opinion , putting the video on youtube so others ...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ted in the virtual world and new gadgets ,the old ones do not get along with it. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 161.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9751552795 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60341655864 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639751552795 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8972961237 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291848601816 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126589256661 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749819277065 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177145933376 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077386817236 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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