The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030

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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030

The graph shows a data report made in 2008 about the level of usage energy in USA from 1980 and expectations until 2030.

Petrol and Oil have increased along with Coal and Natural Gas. Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower, on the other hand, have only a slight raise.

In 1980 Petrol and Oil was at 35 quadrillion units of consumption, suffering a decrease until 1985 when the level of consumption starts to increase, reaching 40 quadrillion units in 2010. From that year is expected to have a elevation in the level of consumption at 50 in 2030. Also Coal and Natural Gas have raised their level of consumption with 10 quadrillion units until 2010 and is expected to upper their level of usage with another 10 quadrillion units through 2030.

The Nuclear, Solar/Wind and Hydropower started in 1980 with the lower level of usage at 4 quadrillion units, having a slight fluctuation in 2010 they reach 5 quadrillion units of consumption. The projection to 2030 is to stay at the same level.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rom 1980 and expectations until 2030. Petrol and Oil have increased along with...
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...level of consumption starts to increase, reaching 40 quadrillion units in 2010. F...
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85964912281 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77803015166 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9446002708 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232674514079 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12058320293 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126681038682 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175167783498 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.157270562396 0.0819641961636 192% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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