Many believe that the young millenial people a brings impact and influence to our modern society comparing to the older generation. This maybe a result of their high interest in technology specifically, internet usage and enrollment to advance education. That provides them wide range of knowledge and allow them to express their own opinion freely.
Advanced technology such as the Internet and mobile phones are being make use of young people today. Through cellphones, they keep themeselves updated in current events and latest news. For instance, young nurses use their phones and mobile data to search for the drug study of new medicines. These give them knowledfe about the important things to watch out before giving drugs.
As a result, by using the advantage of technology, youngsters tend tobhave a wide range of ideas. They keep themselves updated to the new trends and modern issues thus, giving them the edge in working their task effectively. These give them the chance to be promoted and be an effecient employee. In contrast, adults do not make themselves well updated with technology making their skills parochial to the work assign to them.
By expressing their opinions freely the young adults creates a misunderstanding with the older people in solving current and old issues about the society. Millenials uses their wisdom to voice out what they think is right. In fact, many organizations were lead by teenagers. These group brings awareness about the popular issues worldwide. Topics like environmental rehabilitation, AIDS and depression are given attention, for they are know these issues are being faced by the modern society today. These made them influential through their action and program. Like young bloggers in the internet and writers in the newspaper that recieves millions of followers worldwide.While older adults also tend to do these but purely focus on political issues that does not interest the population now unlike before. Moreover, they are believe to be conservative individual into this modern society.
All in all, young adults seems to be influencial because of their adaptation to technology and modern world. While the older one, remain traditional in using their skills and belief. These made the two generation in chaos in terms of their own opinions. But with total awareness and adjustment with each other way of life, both can share an extraordinary experience in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 437, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ssion are given attention, for they are know these issues are being faced by the mod...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...ecieves millions of followers worldwide.While older adults also tend to do these but ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
...n now unlike before. Moreover, they are believe to be conservative individual into this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in contrast, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26735218509 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73982930856 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537275064267 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6710041851 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0869565217 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9130434783 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148124391313 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431752838875 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645312810298 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906192598656 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513867927083 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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