Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation.
Why is this the case?
What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people?
Possibly today youngesters are the most powerful compared to other periods of the history. I think this is because of the help of the new technologies and inventions, however that might cause difficulties for old people to communicate and connect with the young.
There are number of reasons that give a privilege to today's young generation, which did not happen before. First, with the creation of Internet and smartphones, tasks believed impossible can be done easily and much faster. Now students, in any time that they want , can open and connect to the Internet through their phones to find articles and information based on their studies from websites in a minute or learn new languages for free , but those were considered so challenging before that students had to go abroad to learn them. Second, the young who are disabled also can add their contribution to the society by robots today. For example, in companies which deal with waste , there are those people who are actually coding and controlling robots via their computers.
On the other hand, modern technologies have certain algorithms to use which makes them complicated for elderly but not for the young. Old people have got used to writing letters and going to someone's house in order to meet them in person instead of using social media which is common among youngesters. Therefore it is rare to see chatting those people together. Apart from that, in companies or factories , there is a demand for people who understand how to use modern technologies and for this reason workplaces are not places anymore where the young and old can bond with each other.
To conclude, new devices help today's young be best of all the time but not for link between old people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, apart from, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92491467577 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59381666848 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587030716724 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4790042685 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218216580174 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823299839465 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554480734359 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141130546314 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508368390348 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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