Young people today mostly learn by reading books or watching movies, rather than real-life experiences. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Nowadays, it is undeniable that young absorb knowledge though books or films, rather than to getting experience from reality. In my opinion, I completely agree about statement because it is current trend in now although it have its own benefits, but it is not sufficient.
On the one hand, learning from books and films are beneficial for teenagers in current. As people can see, Films and books in now are invested carefully to easily approach youngsters by its quality like image or casts and also professionalism. Besides, approaching knowledge summarized in books and films are faster than getting experience from life it can go through to the main problem that they have to confront and go directly to instructions and ways to address it instead of in life, freshman have to find out their issue and dealing with by themselves, it takes a lot of time to do it. For example, through reading guides or watching videos, some young citizens know how to cook some sophisticated dishes for themselves and or course their tastes is completely fantastic.
On the other hand, just looking information in works or movies is not inadequate for people especially youngsters. They are still young and definitely to have a lack of experience controlling feelings. For instance, some freshman in the first time to do something like cooking a dish, despite watching videos many times, they can easily getting fail and when they fail, they feel depressed and can not strict their emotions. However, this status can be solve in real-life when young people can instruct carefully and their tutors can know their weakness and strength which can help them a lot. Furthermore, youngsters also get inspiration from excellent people from real-life that can be fake in films. In spite of adequate information in books, young have to learn some soft-skills by themselves like finding out themselves to comprehend and acknowledge what young inhabitants want to do.
In conclusion, it is true that more and more teenagers have an tendency to receive knowledge from manuals and movies because of its convenience. However, it is not sufficient while young have to learn some skills from reality like controlling emotions and comprehending themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... it is current trend in now although it have its own benefits, but it is not suffici...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...hing videos many times, they can easily getting fail and when they fail, they feel depr...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... true that more and more teenagers have an tendency to receive knowledge from manu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11232876712 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86022148695 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52602739726 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.595641794 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.285714286 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0714285714 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222635562095 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779895206146 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387232473286 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130422686424 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420088445748 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.