Young people in work force change the jobs for a few years.what are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Without having doubts,young generation changes jobs from one to another within a period of one to two years. This essay will examine some worthwhile merits alongwith demerits for person and society.
To embark with, there are a lots of fruitful results of changing job. To explain it, in some cases young ones complete study in their interesting subject, but after study, they do get job in other field and they cannot feel satisfied after few years back, they leave job. However, sometimes people think that they obtain higher salery if they can start work in their choosen field they can live luxurious life. Apart from this, whenever youngsters do jobs in different type of companies, they obtain work experience as well as they learn communication skills and they can make better career to their life. Last but not least, people meet different types of people. Therefore, they learn other area's language and culture, young ones go to outside and learn how to manage their work and time.
In addition to this, there are some drawbacks of it is, when people change job after some years, they cannot understand new environment that is why they do not get satisfited with other workers. Moreover, if they change job after few time, employers do not trust on this type of people because old workers know better that they leave job after one or two years. Last but not least, when people change job, they do waste a lot of time on job hunting because people do work in different type of companies they cannot manage time for their updown.
In conclusion, people should start job according to their subject because they can interest much better. However, when young ones change job sometimes they cannot feel satisfied with their work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , young
Without having doubts,young generation changes jobs from one to ano...
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Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...and society. To embark with, there are a lots of fruitful results of changing job. To...
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Line 2, column 693, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
... of people. Therefore, they learn other areas language and culture, young ones go to ...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...ers. Moreover, if they change job after few time, employers do not trust on this type of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86486486486 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27712727344 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5900615645 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.769230769 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245709716782 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112116204718 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450275185908 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17701489604 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279003202702 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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