In your opinion, should young people choose their profession, or should their parents choose for them ?
Deciding on a profession work or career path is one of the major key point in everyone’s life. While some people argue that young people should make up their mind and decide which path they go for, others, however, agree with the idea of parents must choose for their children. As for my opinion, I believe that individuals have to choose their own path according to their lives and their dreams.
As a matter of fact, as for the improvement of young people personality, it is very for them to know how to take a decision and take risks. Making choices by their own doesn’t mean that they don’t listen to elders’ point of view. On the contrary, this might help them to extract the essential thoughts and element what they hate. Choosing one’s preferring things, will allow them to love what they will do. It makes the job more interesting and enjoyable. Without doubt, they won’t feel any stress or work under pressure. In other words, they will be taught responsibility and ownership. Young people have different view of life than their parents, they see the world from another perspective. For example, researches made on a large scale in many European countries about how choosing your own career will be the best way of life, most of the happiest young people were working in their dream job chosen by them.
On the other side, we all know that the elders have great experiences in life, and we should get benefit of those experiences. They saw the world changed around them, they have better ideas for life aspects, and of course they knew their children very well. As a result of this , choosing a career for their kids would be easily and best choice for some.
To conclude, jobs which will be chosen by the parents might not work for their kids. If someone feel that he forced to do something for the rest of his life, he won’t be able to achieve any progress. So as a matter of fact, young people should go for their own decision and choose the work that suit them, and of course with the advice of their parents, everything would be perfect at that time. Parents should leave their children choose their own path in professional career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, as for, for example, of course, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65364583333 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3343786461 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9991815587 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0526315789 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478464668804 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147447354066 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134875319483 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331332537697 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107398432357 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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