with youth crime on the rise, some people think that children who commit crimes should be punished equally to adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
On one hand, children can be taken advantage of if they receive priority punishments by law. In other words, they become a tool for crime institutions to utilize, engage in illegal activity. The underlying reason being that crimes all know that when punished, children are only subject to the lightest punishment, warning, and the heaviest punishment, to re-education which helps bad objects continue to borrow children's hands to commit illegal acts. As a result, today we witness children's images of all ages with many dangerous criminal behaviors such as theft, drug trafficking, or even homicide. However, when considering the motive of these law-violating behavior we can identify that it does not come from themselves.
On the other hand, it is worth considering that the offence of youngsters stems from their immature minds with lack of awareness, which makes them be more affected by others when they are lured. The age of crime can range from four to ten years old, it is too young to know if something is right or wrong. The behavior of these children is completely directed by professional criminals so they are not aware of the seriousness of their actions. Besides that, the repetition causes these children to gradually turn into professional criminals while they do not yet know that it is criminal behavior. As a result, they receive legal punishment instead of learning and having fun. So the proportion of delinquency is increasing day by day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, while, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09543568465 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83140830466 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614107883817 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3453906749 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.636363636 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138206774135 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498074818592 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352324075057 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11310902203 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289994283214 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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