some people think that it is beneficial for youngsters to live on their own. Do you agree or disagree with it?
A portion of individuals consider that students who are going to enter universities should live on their own and it benefits them in many ways. I completely agree with the above statement. Although, students have to go through many difficulties, but they will develop many useful skills that will help them in their future.
To begin with, there are numerous benefits of living alone or with friends. Firstly, it will help them to become responsible. When a student starts to live by his own, he has to do all his chores by himself and if he is living with his friends he has to share responsibilities for every household task. This would make students more social as they have to adjust with other peers. Moreover, they will also learn the value of money, as they manage their expenditure by themselves.
Apart from being responsible, young people will become competent in every aspect of life. They set their own goals and achieve them with their own efforts. As a result, they develop the skill of managing their task independently. Moreover, young people also learn to prioritize their tasks. They know skipping the class will not only affect their grades, it will also potentially damage their reputation in class. This time management skill help them in their later life.
Finally, students will acquire the ability of multitasking. As young people have to do all their work, such as household, college related and work related by themselves, they become affluent in multitasking. Companies these days hire those employees
who can do many works at a time and do them proficiently. These students who live by their own are definitely ahead of others, who still depend on parents.
In conclusion, despite the fact that young people have to struggle with many issues, such as being inexperience in cooking, homesickness, and burden of studies, but they will become very efficient in each aspect of life. They will learn many usefull skills that are going to prepare them for real world adulthood.
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- some people think that it is beneficial for youngsters to live on their own. Do you agree or disagree with it? 56
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- Some people think that it is beneficial for youngsters to live on their own. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Who
...anies these days hire those employees who can do many works at a time and do them...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, still, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02083333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66414102335 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.734662176 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.35 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227296900206 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784846856836 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557478651211 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125206693412 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433133145256 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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