Youth unemployment is increasing in many countries in the world .What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to solve it?
Recently, job opportunities are more and more difficult to seek in many countries especially for young people.Furthermore,youth unemployment will quickly become a global crisis during the pandemic .This essay will indicate the major cause of this problem and modify it. [very good]
First of all , due to the development of sophisticated modern technology , the increasing use of robots and new technology to do basic job contribute to youth unemployment. While for some companies , that innovates as well as reduce more salaries, the number of jobseekers grow contributing to considerably negative consequences . Therefore ,to dealt with it, young people should learn greater skills .In other words , this is possibly as a result of the academic path people are choosing to take. Youth should be encouraged to train in skills which they are inadequate.
Another factor is the lack of apprenticeships in many firms. Apparently, when some companies recruit new employees, they hire those who are already apprenticed and have experience. Thus, companies should be supported by the government to develop training schemes.Beside that, jobseekers are anticipated to have general knowledge such as using mobile technology , laptop, being organised and touch typing.
To sum up, the level of youth unemployment will probably rise significantly in most countries and become one of the most burning issues .Therefore, I believe that the government should determine detailed measures and associate with these companies to tackle the issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61637931034 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31651034565 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659482758621 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2630653743 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.777777778 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.4444444444 7.06120827912 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162031766701 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566517880401 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474701809747 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920242028028 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399721961271 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.