Zoos are some times seen as necessary but poor alternative to a natural environment. Discuss some of the arguments for and against keeping animal in zoos.
Zoos is the place , where animal can live safely without any wary. Keeping animal in zoos is highly debatable question, but I will made my decision after discussing pros and cons of keeping animals in zoos.
Initially, we live in a fastest growing world, but in these world behind the development some animals are extinct. Albeit, Zoos is the place where we can save it from extinct. Animal can live safely under the examine of doctors or zoos employees. However, we can knowledge about animal, and from this knowledge, we know the behavior of animals.
Although, people don’t have time or chance to see them in the forest but with the help of zoos, people can see animal. Moreover, zoos employees with the help of animal sexuality activity growing new animal. Animal can get a food at a regular time, which is also be safe from other activity. Doctor’s of animal can give it to special treatment during illness. For an example, New Zealand has more animal in the zoos, Moreover, they can save pandas in that zoos and protect them against extinct.
On the flip side, keeping animal in the zoo, animal lost their freedom. They can not get natural environment around them. Animal disturb by people and some times they can get out of control. Animal can be also danger for zoos employee. Recent example is that, in New Delhi(India), lion has been attack to employee of zoos and he was death at a moment. But, advantages out weight disadvantages.
In conclusively, I would like to say that, animals also have their personal life but, look at about their safety, keeping animals into zoos is the better idea.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260606060606 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.133333333333 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0606060606061 0.0946595960268 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393939393939 0.0501214627716 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0575757575758 0.0437548338989 132% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133333333333 0.122226691241 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0242424242424 0.0403226058552 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43809384915 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0121212121212 0.0326793684256 37% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0030303030303 0.00163938923432 185% => OK
Determiners: 0.069696969697 0.0861772015684 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0393939393939 0.021408717616 184% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00909090909091 0.011925033212 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1748.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 316.048096192 89% => OK
Chars per words: 6.2206405694 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334519572954 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231316725979 0.28420135186 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.131672597865 0.203846283523 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0818505338078 0.137316102897 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43809384915 2.80594681477 87% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 56.7931249049 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6111111111 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7429004879 49.517814964 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1111111111 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.814263465372 48% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.99599198397 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.742783709 49.1944974215 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.81578947368 1.69124875643 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392923293697 0.332605444948 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0936755961253 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0619645482681 0.0668466124924 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517400185538 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177442726533 0.148594505496 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140109093862 0.134430193775 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062447615214 0.0742795772207 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.327937722312 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.110446337032 0.0638462369009 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243238818064 0.228012699653 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628998790517 0.058150111329 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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