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Undoubtedly, there is hardly any area where women’s have not proved their mettle. In spite of the proven fact, there are some people, oppose the indulgence of women’s in defense system, while others disagree. In this essay, I am going to discuss both the side of the coin. However, I believe that all females need to be given an equal opportunity including security services, regardless of gender.
On one hand, some people think that women’s doesn’t belong to army services, as possess less physical strength as compared to man, and involvement of female in the military can impact both morale and on-ground services. In addition to that, women’s lose a lot of their training and duty time because of pregnancy and other reasons, which can impact their performance. In few military services, women's are asked to resign if they are pregnant, that increase the possibility of being losing a vital member in the field suddenly. As a result, it will weaken the effectiveness of defense system.
On the Other hand, today we are living in the egalitarian society, as per which every individual has right to choose their profession, therefore, women’s should, without a doubt, need to be given an equal opportunity, especially when all requirement met. Moreover, there are many positions in the military which require little physical conditioning and more intellectual training, discipline, teamwork and a leadership quality, which can be easily met by women's. Their great communication and leadership quality will become useful in many cases, like consoling the team in a tough situation.
Furthermore, a male officer cannot arrest the female criminal in some countries because of their cultural restrictions, in these situations, women officers are necessary. In some cases many women’s victim can easily open up in front of other women officers than male, that supports the involvement of women is indeed in police services.
To sum up, the ability of the person should be the deciding factor for the opportunity, not some old beliefs and non-relevant factors. Therefore, equal rights should be provided to women’s to participate in army services.
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- ABC 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, as a result, in many cases, in some cases, in spite of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34393063584 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99862002854 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583815028902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4301963434 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.266666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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