The advantage of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, modern world becomes a small village in which English is known almost by the majority of the residents of the globe and it acts as a powerful tool in marketing, education, tourism industry and the like. The expansion of English as a global language has its benefits and drawbacks. I believe that the drawbacks by far outweigh the benefits. This will be discussed in this essay.
The expansion of English has been criticized by a group of sociologists and experts in the recent years. Some people worry that if one single language becomes dominant, other languages will disappear and the language of the small communities will be in danger of extinction in the future. On the other hand, it will have some detrimental effects on the culture, custom and tradition since the dominant language will bring its own culture with it. Besides, the senior citizens of the society will find it difficult to learn a new language and it leads to a polarized society in which individuals will suffer the lack of intelligibility.
Sharing a single language can bring benefits worldwide too. Firstly, global adoption of a single language can mean a lot in terms of economic industry. As an example, International companies have the chance to find workers who can speak English easily and communicate with overseas companies in trading and marketing. Secondly, it brings more job opportunities for people who are seeking for a decent job. Finally, it can bring people much closer and gives them the chance to contribute in a better way.
To sum up, although the expansion of English language globally may have determinant effects on developing a society, it will cause some deterring effects on the existence of cultures and traditions of the inhabitants of some areas.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03401360544 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84398492719 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534013605442 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6387765748 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213795711662 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758863700189 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638452613624 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128739081665 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531476462323 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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