Nowadays, people are exposed to a wide range of advertisements, ranging from TV and radio commercials to physical forms. Although this has brought about both advantages and drawbacks, I believe the disadvantages are far greater.
There are many reasons why the impacts of advertisements on people might be detrimental, with the most significant one being an increasing tendency to consumerism. When people find it hard to go anywhere without being exposed to advertisements, they are more likely to be persuaded to purchase superfluous and low-quality products. This may even cause a throw-away society in which individuals buy more single-used goods, leading to a rise in the number of waste materials. Moreover, in many cases, fast food companies overrate the quality of their products and tempt people to use such nutrients which lack proper ingredients and contain high levels of saturated fat and sugar, leading to chronic health issues. Obesity and heart diseases are cases in points.
Some may argue that the advertising industry has profound impacts on people's lives. Making an informed choice by reading various catalogues and brochures is the most beneficial factor highlighted by the advocates of such opinion. Since people have to work long hours, they may have less time to shop around in order to compare the prices and qualities of their commodities and consequently find real bargains. However, in many cases, such brochures do not provide adequate information needed for making wise choices. For instance, how people can find flattering clothes when they are unable to try or finger them?
In conclusion, it appears to me that even though advertisements may enable people, in some cases, to make sensible choices, the myriads of caused severe problems, including health issues, render exposing to them quite dangerous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...eases are cases in points. Some may argue that the advertising industry has profo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in many cases, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36896551724 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92738312118 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658620689655 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0833886809 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138601104491 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444077598668 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325565056824 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693478293328 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363218221888 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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