Dear John,
You were a god send to take care of me after I was invovled in an accident last Monday. I am writing this letter to express my utmost gratitude for everything that you did for me.
My name is Manish Nair, working as a data analyst at lionsbridge and I am 21 and I live with my family in toronto, last Monday at 8.30 while I was travelling on my way to work, my motorbike crashed in an attempt to save a cat which jumped in front of my bike and I lost control, I was severly injured and was not able to wake up on my own. If you hadn't decided to help me, the situation could have been worse.
I cannot thank you enough for your kindness and help. You even took the burden of taking me to the hospital, that was so noble of you. When my parents and wife heard about how courageously you helped me they prayed for your well being even though they don't know you.
I regret that I could not thank you enough. Please accept my invitation to visit my home with your family and allow me and my family to thankyou properly.
Yours truly
Manish Nair
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
... a data analyst at lionsbridge and I am 21 and I live with my family in toronto, last ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...s not able to wake up on my own. If you hadnt decided to help me, the situation could...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ed for your well being even though they dont know you. I regret that I could not th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13526570048 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18393823662 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618357487923 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.0873950126 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27807107968 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141824617331 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841356760447 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189901585046 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125262203479 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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