The air pollution

Essay topics:

The air pollution

In my opinion, one of the most serious pollutions that cause damage to the earth is the air pollution. It has been destroying the air environment by many ways. Firstly, gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming which may have a devastating on the plant in the world. Moreover, we are using too much fossil fuels that are industrializing our life and making the planet dirtier. All of them dump ever greater quantities of waste into the environment so that they are harmful. Last but not least, all these reasons I mentioned derived from the poor human consciousness. It is the main reason why the pollutions appear. Therefore, we must have solutions to protect the environment from being destroyed. We should use fresh energy such as wind, solar, water, …. instead of coal, oil. However, it is important to raise people’s awareness of the environmental problems. In other way, we can spread the 3RS campaign to everyone in our community. In conclusion, we can’t deny that air pollution is developing very fast and it will be more dangerous so that we must prevent it.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 801, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Instead
...h energy such as wind, solar, water, …. instead of coal, oil. However, it is important...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87368421053 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81814461271 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0869394494 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2307692308 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2123340844 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706820007569 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110275135042 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2123340844 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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