Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

Essay topics:

Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

The 21st century has witnessed a tremendous growth in the usage of air transportation, especially air freight. transportation of goods by air across the globe is the most sought out solution by many companies and organisations. this increase in favouritism towards choosing of air freight for fruits and vegetables mainly corresponds to economies of scale and smaller shelf life of the products. I strongly believe, there are definite advantages of using aerial route for shifting of goods, especially for frutis and vegetables.

To begin with, the world has witnessed so much globalisation in the past decade that boundaries between countries and continents now seem to have ceased to exist. such heights of globalisation has made it easier for the countries to connect with each other and co-operate among themselves. this has paved way for the logistics and supply chain firms to invest in air freight, despite their high fares. As countries come closer and cooperate, it becomes easier to plan and strategise for economies of scale thereby reducing the cost of transportation per item.

Secondly, fruit and vegetables are considered as perishables owing to their very low shelf- life. Also, much of the time for transportation of fruits and vegetables is lost in petty activities such as picking, sorting, cleaning and packaging. Given the limited time left , between low shelf-life and petty activities, it becomes an important priority to shift the goods at the fastest speed possible. thereby leading to choose air frieght to be the most optimised route for shipping.
There are a lot many advantages to air transportation other than those mentioned here and thus i Would conclud that usgae of air transportation for exporting of goods between countries is for sure the most beneficial way for all the stakeholders involved.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, thus, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31399317406 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04871404345 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57337883959 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8980165042 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215587782267 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755682423561 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434063532999 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133847952949 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433095246661 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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