Many people argue that electric cars should be replaced with cars which burn fossil fuels to function.I agree to a certain extend that some restrictions should be made in the use of cars that burn fossil fuels and electric cars should be more in usage.
Firstly, the cars that run by burning fuels should be banned as it creates a lot of pollution to the environment.To explain, the fossil fuels burn and produce carbon which is then released in to the environment,causing air pollution.Moreover,the people inhale the poisonous gases and end up in serious health problems.For example, cars which run by fuels releases hydrocarbon which in turn leads to global warming. Apart from that,these natural resources are very expensive nowadays that people have to spend huge amount of money on purchasing it.
Secondly, the electric cars should be made more in use as it is more convenient for the people.In addition to this,it is cheap and causes less pollution to the environment.Although it does not need fuels to run,it uses electricity to function.To explain, the electric cars are kept for charge around 20 hours which then can be used if it is fully charged.However,electric cars reduce the problem of environmental pollution to a great extend.
To conclude,electric cars should be used instead of fuel cars.The main reason is that the latter make the air more polluted and unhealthy condition to the people.While,the former causes less pollution to the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, apart from, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17573221757 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48111119999 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535564853556 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.87179476 49.4020404114 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 247.4 106.682146367 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.8 20.7667163134 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377885879678 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219779876246 0.084324248473 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172191359327 0.0667982634062 258% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267957454692 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151357667459 0.056905535591 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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