All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?
Paraphrase:
All Cars that burn fossil fuels should be prohibited from use and they should be replaced by electric cars.
opinion and main reasons:
I agree with the given sentence; Because all the cars that burn fossil fuels create the Air Pollution and the use of fossil fuels has to be minimized.
MBP 1: Topic sentence: Creation of Air Pollution
All the cars in which fossil fuels are used emit carbon dioxide in the air.
release of carbon dioxide in the air leads to increase in temperature on the surface of earth which is called “The Greenhouse Effect”; This would result into major catastrophic events in the future.
Example: Volkswagen Car in which petrol is used releases Carbon dioxide in the air whereas Tesla electric Car doesn’t release any such harmful elements in the air and hence it doesn’t cause any air pollution.
MBP 2: Topic sentence: Minimization of usage of fossil fuels
because we don’t have huge resources or reserves of fossil fuels; Hence if we will not limit the usage of these, then our next generation will not have these resources.
Also, Fossil fuels if used once can not be used again; these are non-renewable resources of energy; hence as per the principle of sustainability, the usage of these resources should be limited.
Example: We have limited source of Petrol and Also, Petrol if used once cannot be used again.
Conclusion:
Agree because usage of cars in which fossil fuels are used result into polluted air and we have limited fossil fuels reserves with us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Opinion
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Suggestion: Release
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Suggestion: Because
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, then, whereas, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07392996109 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51661649186 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482490272374 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0456558517 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.888888889 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304570946623 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162826566315 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152237154747 0.0667982634062 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136542983476 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156042856219 0.056905535591 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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