All education, primary, secondary and further education, should be free to all people and paid for by the government.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
A nation’s growth is reflected by its educated and healthy populace. Due to which, a lot of emphasis is laid on educational and medical sectors by the governments. The idea of providing free education is an enduring debate. A vast multitude argue that education is a right of the citizens and should be offered at no cost. Nevertheless, people who are against this opinion state that free education would overburden the government and hamper the learning system. I agree with the latter and assert that it should be at affordable costs.
An inevitable fact is that no limitation should be laid on education. Those supporting this view outline that making edification system accessible to all levels of the society would eradicate the social imbalance and would generate more working force constituting to growth and prosperity in fields akin to scientific, technological and aerospace. Kenya, for example, provides education for all its nationals free of cost regardless of their caste, creed, color and financial status. Due to which, 80% of the young are employed in diverse sectors driving Kenya towards a spot among the world super powers.
The other category who hold a notion that education should be charged argue that rendering edification for free will have an overwhelming pressure on the nation’s budget which results in no allocation of funds to other pressing problems like unemployment, medication and rural development. A country like India cannot offer it for free considering the outstanding loans and huge population. Educating 100 billion at all levels of education would leave the government bankrupt. Hence I feel offering free rudimentary education would be an ideal scenario.
In conclusion, the edification system should not be made free instead it should be made affordable owing to the financial and economical imbalance that would arise if studies are offered at no cost to the masses.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, nevertheless, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2996742671 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97118759661 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4347982671 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.466666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200273640984 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703251246415 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493783657527 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126452836516 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234683412111 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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