You work for an international company. You are celebrating for the special family event and would like to have time off for it. Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter, you should:
explain what celebration is.
tell how long you want to take time off
say how your work could be done while you are away.
Dear Cameroon,
I am writing to request for a 2 week off. As I have been constantly informing you about my sister's marriage this month end, I will be needing a leave from 15th to 31st December.
My sister being the youngest of all relatives both on mother's and father's side, the event holds a great significant value for each one of us in the family. I also had to mention the 7day long wedding that happens in our community. Immense responsibility is bestowed on me during this time.
James will be providing the code during my absence. I have already transferred the knowledge about the new project that I am dealing with Larsen and Turbo. James and I were able to install AWS and Unix on James PC and downloaded the secured encrypted data. I also provided the access to the shared location of documents to which he can refer to. I will available over email and phone except the day of wedding in case of any assistance or emergency.
Also, please accept this as my personal invitation for the marriage. I expect you to take time to bless my sister and spend some time with our family. Wedding is on 25th at Classic Gardens.
Your' sincerely,
John Gresham
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...sisters marriage this month end, I will be needing a leave from 15th to 31st December. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64285714286 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53964484099 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652380952381 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2171934345 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6428571429 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157544426558 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473435304397 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517283086424 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983555987189 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606513650252 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.