All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer.
What problems does this cause?
How can we overcome the problems of poverty?
The economic gap between the rich and the poor has been on the rise, both nationally and internationally. This has resulted in a manifold crisis, while the methods to liberate the destitute from its clutches seems so simple. It requires the patronage from governments and rich societies alike.
An imbalance in the distribution of wealth induces a spiraling cycle of poverty attributes to interrelated issues. Crime rates are generally on the upside and so is the abuse of drugs, alcohol, fuelling such crimes. Exploited ones have to engage in part-time or full-time jobs that are physically demanding or hazardous, lacking oversight. Supporting the family, they even resort to child labour. To add to misery, filthy living conditions such as thatched houses, poor quality water and landscapes is a rife amongst the impoverished. Oftenly, it leads to the spread of diseases and ill-health, high infant mortality rates.
The solutions to lifting people out of poverty involves a great scrutiny. Crucial steps to impose taxes on the affluent must be taken up by the government. Yet, the moneyed, fuel the election campaigns and seek the credit of it later. Unconditionally, they should welcome projects to uplift the desolate ones. For instance, universal healthcare for low-income families, affordable housing plans and so on. Additionally, the riches must come forward and become philanthropists to return a part of their share to the working class. For example, starting a free education plan for their workers.
In conclusion, the stakeholders should take strong measures to rescue the needy ones from unprecedented exploitation.
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| 2019-12-28 | Jayant Chohda | 11 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.421875 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0677345849 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68359375 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7987525479 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.6470588235 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0757743882935 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195192816303 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277683721825 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0370445323394 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278438426931 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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