Treatment of the employees by their employers actually give the clear picture of the enterprise. Most people are in favour of every employee in the office should get same number of holidays whereas other think ot should depend upon the work and the post of the person. I agree to some extent with the statement. In this essay, I will discuss pros and cons with my opinion.
To begin with, holidays are regarded as right of the employee though provision was given as a facility to them. Even if, it is regarded as facility then also working in the same office why some are given more privileges than others. First and most prominent, issue is related to the dignity of the work. As stated in the constitution nobody can discriminate on the basis of duty or work one does in the life to earn his living, so providing different set of holdiays it is a shear violation of the right of the workers. Secondly, holidays are taken in the condition of emergency such as sickness, family issues etc. They can happen to anybody, irrespective to the post the person holds. So, objective of the holidays should be kept in mind rather than making it a perk and increase the holidays like the salary hike witb every promotion.
On the flip side, there are arguments from the other perspective, every employee perform diffrent duties and each duty involve different level of energy. Those post which involves frequent outdoor shifts, they need more holidays to spend with their family as they do not return to their home every evening. Further, some workers perform vigrous labour they can not work six days a week as they require time to give proper rest to their bodies to prevent themselves from permanent injury. They require concession in holidays. Moreover, mental stress increases with promotion in the post so they require more holidays to rejuvenate their life and break monotony of life.
In conclusion, dignity of workers should be the priority in the company so is the safety of the workers. Holidays should be decided on the basis of requirement instead of granted as perks. Then only, it's objective can be achieved and company can function properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81401617251 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48625079775 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536388140162 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2274160256 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134573977909 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443999873 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521176036511 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984428164535 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589394684739 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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