Appearance is not everything. Discuss
Looking good might not be the crucial aspect that can be considered as a replacement for talent, although in some industries it is still quite misused. In my view, I strongly believe that talent has a strong and inevitable upper hand over appearance.
Firstly, Many poor students who lacks in good look, frequently achieve a high academic score with a waive off in fees granted by Dean. Therefore, these results increase high chances of getting an academic scholarship for further education advancement.
Secondly, Many educated individuals who do not look good in their physical appearance are able to get a better job and a better income based on their talent and expertise. Thus, it facilitate a better improvement in their standard of living.
Thirdly, Dance no longer consider appearance over talent as a way to enter and work in this Industry. Great Dancing skills can help you to land on a job in film fraternity, while opening up plethora of opportunities for career growth. For instance, Every year Zee Music Channel hosts the dance competition show to not only encourage dance all over the nation but also provides a platform to dancers to showcase their talent to the judges.
However, sometime some of the family members of Celebrity easily make entry into Film Industry without much obstruction
caused to them. Despite all of this, opportunities created by talent outweigh the few benefits gained from appearance.
In conclusion, it seems reasonable that talent undoubtedly holds significant importance over the good looks of a human being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ntly achieve a high academic score with a waive off in fees granted by Dean. Therefore,...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'facilitates'?
Suggestion: facilitates
...on their talent and expertise. Thus, it facilitate a better improvement in their standard ...
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Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ent to the judges. However, sometime some of the family members of Celebrity easily make...
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Line 12, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e over the good looks of a human being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18503937008 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81904334731 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673228346457 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2267763925 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8333333333 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0344812657689 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0129184030845 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293635836316 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0125963317401 0.151304729494 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202444585455 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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