Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value the quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In some corporations, formal wear is required for every employee, whereas some others just focus on the value of work. While there are some great benefits to dressing smartly, I think it is better to concentrate on the superiority of work.
On the one hand, there should be some major advantages to formal wear. Firstly, some companies always appreciate incivility, it will be rude to go to your office and wear trousers or sandals, for example, Microsoft, which is an American multinational technology corporation, has punished thousands of workers due to their fashion styles or ostentatious clothes during works. Secondly, showing respect is another considerable benefit. It is worthless to prepare a comprehensive speech without treating your opponents or partners with deference. Lastly, dressing smartly to show everyone that you are a well-educated person, hence, your workers will assume that you are not serious if you wear casual clothes.
On the other hand, from my perspective, it is more beneficial to focus on the quality of work. Each occupation requires your different responsibilities and experiences, they want you to contribute to the goals of their organizations, if none of those requirements are done, you will be sacked immediately. A company also appreciates your working hours and salary, depending on how much time that you are at the working zone, the more wages you will be given. Last but not least, a corporation also prioritizes none discrimination and harassment in working time because working efforts will not be accurate if you are in alienation or being boycotted by everyone. For example, black people are sometimes being bullied although they do not succumb to their freedom and find a suit position in the company.
In conclusion, both of those arguments have their own merits. On balance, however, it seems that the value of work should be highly appreciated due to the aforementioned reasons above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24679487179 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05791235837 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3713715046 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.928571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201496111251 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735826828618 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418603171749 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137013298086 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350825520298 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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