Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is one group that asserts that public figures are not fairly treated by people and media whereby another group is of the belief that famous personalities have no private life and its the price of their popularity. lets get into further debate before reaching to final verdict.
To begin with, behind every success there is always a price one has to pay.Similarly, famous people have to go through a lot of obstacles, hurdles in order to gain fame. However, the point of consideration here is that, at the end of the day famous people are even human beings and they also like to live their lives as normal as any other lay man. It is their fundamental right to keep certain things private instead of being an open book to public.Everyone in universe requires some privacy in life, which famous people deserves too.To elucidate the point further, unfortunately media plays a vital role in keeping celebrities life in limelight.For media persons, its their job to invade in someone's personal life & reveal it to public for gossip & entertainment. In order to get their channel ratings they crosses every limit of intervention.
On the flip side, i do agree that celebrities life cannot be as simple as of any layman's, since people wants to see more of them & wants to know more about their ideals. Yet, there has to be a limit to which these people are reachable. A recent example is one of famous politician in Pakistan, whose marriage controversies is under discussion on almost every news channel these day. In my opinion, it his life. He has all the right to marry anyone. There should not be any debate to whom should he marry & how it is going to effect it on his political career.
To recapitulate, i agree that celebrities life cannot be kept private or totally hidden, but while broadcasting any news about them, media should be very conscious since one wrong news can destroy their private life. Media should abide by ethical rules & should invade in famous people private life to a certain extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, while, as to, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77586206897 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64272092175 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548850574713 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.2550035437 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.714285714 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347952957224 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109280002808 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562315013893 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209288460424 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309748952915 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.