Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life?
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is widely known to all the famous people are constantly followed by the Paparazzi, which gives them less space and freedom to do anything at will, as they have to maintain their public image as well. On the other hand, media constantly keeping a Hawk's eye on their personal life and making things a social affair is also unfair to the celebrities. This essay will discuss both the situations.
Many times it has been seen that media has a tendency to misuse the vast power given by the people. For example, if a businessman does charity work, media questions their intentions leading the people to believe that the person is corrupt. This forces the celebrities to provide justifications for their actions and many others who hold similar positions gets discouraged.
Furthermore, the media does not allowed these people to spend some private family and friends time. They are always on the Lookout for any gossip or scandals they can get a hold of. In fact, they monitor celebrities social media accounts and the word their articles in such a way that people may find them to be negative if the public is not aware enough. For example, if a celebrity posts a party picture with their friends, they try to insinuate that this particular person is always that way.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that this treatment of media is unfair, although exposure is important for famous people but there should be a line between exposure and invasion and it should be maintained.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'allow'
Suggestion: allow
...ed. Furthermore, the media does not allowed these people to spend some private fami...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85826771654 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55348879782 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59842519685 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8558441382 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.181818182 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284630100095 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984452839671 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032944167752 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162961478696 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229044542769 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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