Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The fact cannot be denied that media plays a crucial role in making people public figures, as a result of which, the private lives of the renowned is compromised. A celebrity is often viewed as a role model by the masses, however, the privacy of these individuals must be respected alongside. In my opinion, media at times is brutal and the level of intrusion in one’s personal life should be regulated no matter the person is public figure or a common man.
It is not surprising, that the fans and followers are keen on knowing the minute details about the lives of their favorite celebrities, nevertheless, their private space should be respected. As individual they have personal life and too much of infiltration can have detrimental impacts on a person, such as he/ she may fall prey to mental illness such as anxiety or depression.
On the other hand, it is argued that the famous people sacrifice their confined space as they wish to be popular at all the times. Additionally, it is considered that since the celebrated individuals are paid exorbitantly for their art work, media has all the right to breach their private space and broadcast their private lives.
At the end, in the light of the above stated arguments, I agree with the fact that there are instances where television and press penetrate a lot deeper in an eminent person’s life may it be a politician, an actor or a politician, still this behavior should be restricted and the privacy should be respected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86328125 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82401883801 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1364018014 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.625 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.125 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234202131754 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100783631186 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421412793615 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135984638263 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040602079547 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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