You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
• Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
• State what your skills and experience are.
• Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir,
This letter is with regards to the invitation for applications required for voluntary work as mentioned in your weekly. I am interested in volunteering for teaching English language in developing nations, henceforth, I am sharing relevant details, which might be of help in locating relevant assignment.
As you might be aware of the fact that, summer vacations are approaching, as a result I will be free for a couple of months. Additionally, I believe that education is a fundamental right, moreover, I am passionate about teaching. During weekends I dedicate myself for teaching at the orphanage, not just English but other subjects as well for elementary classes.
I hold master’s degree in English from North Carolina University and have eight years of experience, schooling primary classes at the City Central School. Besides this, I have been enthusiastic regarding the voluntary work since my college days and have actively participated in the same.
I would prefer taking up charity work in India, also I will be available from May up till July. If in case, the nation of choice is not possible I am open to other options as well.
Looking forward for your response.
Your’s Faithfully,
Alex Jhonson
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... just English but other subjects as well for elementary classes. I hold master...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03736728105 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.214540819 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6363636364 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 4.34317383033 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964274108046 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330639471176 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268857847528 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464494343877 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259399126987 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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