Because of global economy many goods including what we need as daily basis produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Indubitably, the world has witnessed a paradigm shift in trade across countries from past decade. Due to global integration, many consumer goods are exported as well as imported within nations through transportation. Apparently, modernisation and westernisation are to be blamed for this universal phenomenon. However, even though this practice brings about a mixed bag of boon and bane, merits outshines demerits
On the constructive part, transporting of goods from one country to another holds a wide range of favorable benefits which are worth mentioning. First and foremost, trade between nations substantially contributes to an exponential rise in profits of the country exporting articles. Seemingly, nations are producing items in surplus; they can assist in meeting the consumer's demand of another country and can reap the benefit of higher revenue. Secondly, although items imported from long distance are costly, they promote the market base by significantly increasing the variety and choice to customers. Henceforth, people are captivated by the quality and buy these things resultantly nation’s gets advantage of more customer base. Thirdly, Is international trade a prominent platform of employment opportunities? Certainly Yes! This practice of exchange of goods among nations escalates the need of drivers, storekeepers, brokers and many more which stimulates a prolific increase in job prospects of these occupations.
On the destructive part, there are some potential shortcomings from this trend for myriad reasons. Chiefly, even though foreign products attract more customers, they are quite expensive to be affordable by normal folks. When articles are imported from longer distance many duties are imposed on them. Consequently, it leads to a significant rise in price of a commodity. According to BBC, 60% of Indian population prefers to buy Chinese products as compared to American products being the cost a paramount factor. Moreover, export-import of essential things requires a lion's share of investment by a nation. Conspicuously, despite higher profits sometimes provinces confront the potential problem of trade debt. To corroborate, India went into financial crises when it increased its imports last year.
Suffice to say; due to advancement the world has undergone numerous changes being worldwide trading the most prominent. On the brighter side, the trend of transporting products from far places is beneficial as it caters the needs of populace, adds to GDP of a nation and act as a key influencing factor in providing employment. While, on the darker side, countries can suffer from catastrophic effect of higher costs and financial debt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2284.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62561576355 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11287176695 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608374384236 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2040726184 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.761904762 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127539588166 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335511981673 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252691098263 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762078705504 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237756828894 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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