Because of the rising cost of housing, many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30s. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Housing has been one of the basic amenities which is still being lacked in many metro cities. This situation, certainly, promotes working professionals in their early 30s to share the house with their parents. Although this essay will discuss both the pros and cons, in my opinion, living with parents can be beneficial in the long-term that can fetch you certain benefits.
To begin with, there are several advantages because of which young people are willing to stay with their families. One most important benefit is saving up on mortgages as housing loans are being sanctioned on high-interest rates. Sharing the house with parents helps you to save on rent, which is exorbitant in some modern cities, provided that the house is owned by them. Another could be for your children’s well-being. If both are working, they get less time to interact with their offsprings and this can impact a child’s behaviour. So, grandparents can help to overcome solitude by sharing experiences of their own life, and It could help them to learn certain life-skills.
However, with this positive trend, there comes a few disadvantages. The first one is dependent on parents not only economically, but psychologically. Highly-qualified people do not have sufficient time to cook for themselves that compel them to start eating food from the outside. The second one is lack of responsibility as most of the errands, generally, being carried by parents. For example, if people are out for work, their parents keep the groceries stocked up and paying the bills such as water, house, and electricity bills.
In conclusion, a long-term stay with parents could have merits and demerits, but it will bring more valuable traits to the children. This could also help in the monetary term that can be helpful for them wherein living in different city restrict in their monthly expenses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11726384365 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81597551253 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586319218241 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9874973947 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322883332658 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101459879333 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695058884562 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194979553987 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561552027351 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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