These generation living like a Film star or a Sportsman have a lot of merits such as improve bank balance as well as get a good name through film-casting or playing games, whereas, some demerits also occur from the non-audience.
Southside of India a brave man living called Pawan Kalyan, he is the wonderful film actor since his life started in 25 years in the film industry and his second role is actively participating in the government projects to deliver good service to the public likewise political leaders. Acting as a hero he gets extensive benefits, for instance, remuneration increases when compare with previously, while on the society he gets a good reputation, mostly all of the citizens open doors for his welcome, on the other hand, he may get some disadvantages from his non-followers and they could criticize his performance, character, and status too.
The famous sportsman also has been living in India, his name is Virat Kohli, an excellent cricket player. Since last 2 years his status increases along with his business expands too meanwhile he got a good character in the society furthermore, being like a good player he has gotten huge followers not only in India but also in foreign countries such as Australia, UK, and Canada, moreover, he is being an ambassador for several cosmetic companies, by this process he gets enormous advantages, on the other hand, some problems also happened such as mass media discourse his credits because of, tremendously he grows faster.
In my view, being a film star or a sportsman may get huge credits and also some demerits occurred.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this generation' or 'These generations'?
Suggestion: This generation; These generations
These generation living like a Film star or a Sportsman ...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ciety he gets a good reputation, mostly all of the citizens open doors for his welcome, on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, likewise, may, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00373134328 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81531025289 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.385407337 49.4020404114 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.5 106.682146367 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.6666666667 20.7667163134 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.1666666667 7.06120827912 356% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0941883006582 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557606471933 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353904748572 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073306918295 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300184488514 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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