Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
It is argued that stardom has its share of advantages and drawbacks. In my opinion, being a popular movie artist or a sports personnel is tough as a profession and has more cons than pros. In this essay, firstly I will discuss the positives of being a famous personality and secondly discuss the negatives of this star life.
Popular cinema stars and sportsmen are always considered as a 'Very Important Person' (V.I.P). Wherever they go, they are treated with utmost care and respect. They receive special entry to most public functions and places and they may also be honored as chief guest for events and television programs. For example, Bollywood actress Madhuri Dixit was invited as a judge for a top rated dance reality TV show. Moreover, these celebrities lead a luxurious lives as they get paid exorbitantly due to their popularity.
However, being famous in the entertainment industry or sports field has serious negative impact on their personal lives. Firstly, they cannot roam freely when they travel and constantly rely on bodyguards. As they have more fans and followers, it is inevitable for them to shun the limelight and when they do so, they are attacked by disappointed fans. Hence, round the clock security is mandatory for them. Secondly, their opinion and views are more prone to criticism. They are subjected to immense pressure by the media and the public which makes them devoid of their personal views. For instance, actor Rajinikanth's recent remark on a social issue sparked controversies even though it was just his personal thought.
In conclusion, although celebrities in film or sports industry appear to have fulfilling lives, in my opinion, it is indeed more difficult to be one. This is due to the fact that their lives are constantly under pressure and threat which may lead to physical and psychological problems thus ruining their personal live altogether in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...nion, being a popular movie artist or a sports personnel is tough as a profession and ...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'life'?
Suggestion: life
...ver, these celebrities lead a luxurious lives as they get paid exorbitantly due to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05047318612 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68891132363 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605678233438 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6350242255 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196598576573 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608660712268 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595588569926 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127890395442 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487398608575 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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