You working for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter•Explain why you want to take some time off work•Give details of the amount of time you need•Suggest how

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You working for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• Explain why you want to take some time off work
• Give details of the amount of time you need
• Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Mr Shah,

I am writing to seek permission to go on a two-week vacation starting next month. My travel was planned few weeks ago but it got confirmed just yesterday. I will be going on a Europe tour with my family and since July is an ideal season, I decided to make use of the opportunity to tour the continent.

I would appreciate if you could kindly grant me 15 days of leave from July 1 to July 15. I will be available in office till June 31 after which I will be travelling and I will resume work from July 16. I hope my absence does not cause inconvenience to you and to the team.

Since I have completed all the pending tasks, there should not be any critical blocker for the team. However, some priority jobs are assigned and distributed to my colleagues so that the work continues without any hassle from the management. Moreover, I will be available online on my mobile most of the time during my trip and hence I would be glad to provide solutions in case of any emergency.

I request you to kindly approve the required leaves. Hoping for a positive response.

Yours faithfully
Abcd Efghi

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...5 days of leave from July 1 to July 15. I will be available in office till June 3...
^
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng and I will resume work from July 16. I hope my absence does not cause inconven...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46829268293 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58257557666 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648780487805 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6887747283 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106454626097 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428128136153 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364455218443 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609128642091 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380931163377 0.0580467560999 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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