Almost every human on earth has a dream of being a famous personality. But being a famous personality is not a piece of cake. It s a debatable topic whether being a famous personality is beneficial or problematic. In my opinion, negative part outweighs the positive one and I have given my reasons for it in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Predominantly, the celebrities do not possess any social life and privacy. Famous people cannot do the things that the average person can. They are unable to visit the local places freely as they are always followed by the security. For instance, celebrities do not have permission to go outside with their friends at the public places as they are always followed by cameras and their fans. Moreover, they cannot eat street food and explore local market as they are afraid to lose their reputation. Thus, there is a no social life of a celebrity.
Secondly, a famous personality can attract too many fake friends. From a celebrity's perspective, it is very hard to distinguish between the real friends and fake friends. Fake ones generally be with the celebrities to gain some personal benefits. For example, it is oftenly published in the newspaper that how an successful actor or actress became friend with the popular celebrity just to gain name and fame and after getting the same, they just start they just kick off them. Thus, life of a famous personality is full of fake friends.
In conclusion, money and fame are desirable to all but these are not the Mantra of happy life. Being a celebrity is not as great as it seems from outside as the one needs to be very careful in every aspect, that is, from their privacy to to choose their friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nly published in the newspaper that how an successful actor or actress became frie...
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ery aspect, that is, from their privacy to to choose their friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72881355932 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69646901164 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532203389831 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4852545732 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0588235294 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195855929441 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751251927816 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658349117809 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120844138317 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311590143515 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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